On 22-Feb-2010 19:45, Bowerbird@aol.com wrote:
i did some more work on gardner's book, "the advocate".
if you prefer to view all the edits on one web-page, see:
Interesting. The colours go a bit wonky at "the awful and spectral presence of Mount Royal." ... page 29 (there's that pagination :-)) Markup aside, I picked up a total of 47 fixes. A lot of extra commas. Several full-stop/comma and semi-/full-colon. Some spelling issues that I can't see how they got past the spell check and a couple of word --> sensible-wrong-word scano's. Thank you! There seems something wonky about the text in red that is "mine" in a few places. Undoubtedly it is mine where I have substituted the correct spelling "Sainte Hélène" where the book had left off the accents inconsistently. But there are places where "my" text contains errors that I do not believe were in my text. I will double-check what exactly I sent you as I might have fixed things during reformatting, as that is normally my final "smooth reading" stage of proofing. ============================================================ Gardner Buchanan <gbuchana@teksavvy.com> Ottawa, ON FreeBSD: Where you want to go. Today.