Bowerbird@aol.com wrote:
the latest version of an "alice" .pdf is available at:
http://snowy.arsc.alaska.edu/bowerbird/alice01/alice01/alice01b.pdf
I see with pleasure that you have implemented many of my suggestions and made your page blackness more even. You made such a horrible fuzz about widow *lines* that I wonder why you dont care a bit about widow *words*? A paragraph should never end with a line containing one single word, (like 'sing' on page 100). A truly knowledgeable typographer would laugh into your face on seeing this. Why do you use both, an empty line *and* an indent to mark paragraphs? One kind of markup is enough. Also: the first paragraph in a chapter should not be indented. The margins are still too small. Your images don't align with the bottom line of the text on the facing page. Some of your poetry is coming out in a washed-out pink (147). I guess the user will be given an option to select if he wants all verse to come out black. -- Marcello Perathoner webmaster@gutenberg.org