all your suggestions fixed, jim, to the degree that i understood them, so take a look at this version, and tell me if there's anything you want changed...
Come on BB, now you are using some kind of oversized, and over-light bizarro font, and you are embedding page margins within HTML, which "everyone" knows is a no-no. Contents now includes Title and Contents itself, both of which is certainly wrong. Title poorly formatted. See the real book to get some idea about how this should be done. Choice of asterisks as a fancy rule looks a bit strange. Too small and too light for the intended use. Missing vertical whitespace before poetry (when translated to MOBI) Gratuitous horizontal rule before "the end" "The End" capitalized wrong, Gratuitous "v?" Now missing cover entirely (when translated to MOBI)